Monday, October 03, 2005

A touching SMS from my frnd

Share a thought of love
with me my friend.
Dream a life of
together with me.
Keep that twinkle in your eyes,
which made me mad.
Keep away those tears,
which makes me sad.
Be my partner at
the shores of loneliness.
Give me a new
definition of happiness.
Hold my hand during
the journey of life.
With our hands together,
every sorrow we will survive.
Hurt me, tease me,
and make me cry.
But in the end give me
a shoulder on which I can cry.

4 comments:

  1. Mind blowing...

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  2. ...Be my partner at
    the shores of loneliness.
    Give me a new
    definition of happiness.
    Hold my hand during
    the journey of life.
    With our hands together,
    every sorrow we will survive.
    Hurt me, tease me,
    and make me cry.
    But in the end give me
    a shoulder on which I can cry.


    uh...i don't like weak person/s...tears and all...this is a bad relationship in the making...love for fun, sex for fun...but marriage, hm...a good partner is needed to share your life, dream and work ...i wouldn't want someone to join me because he's lonely...can't just getting marry because one is lonely...and again, any guy who can cry when teased, and is looking for a definition of happiness in marriage or partnership...darn, better get off my shore and keep going..coz you aren't find it here :)

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  3. ...Be my partner at
    the shores of loneliness.
    Give me a new
    definition of happiness.
    Hold my hand during
    the journey of life.
    With our hands together,
    every sorrow we will survive.
    Hurt me, tease me,
    and make me cry.
    But in the end give me
    a shoulder on which I can cry.


    uh...i don't like weak person/s...tears and all...this is a bad relationship in the making...love and affair are for fun...but marriage or partnership, hm...a good partner is needed to share your life, dream and work ...i wouldn't want someone to join me because he's lonely...can't just join hands because one is lonely(one's mind isn't clear, got it??)...and again, any guy who can cry when teased, and is looking for a definition of happiness in marriage or partnership...darn, better get off my shore and keep going...coz you aren't find it here :) romantic or not..

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  4. well Kim,

    This is how i understood the SMS:

    Be my partner at the shores of loneliness.

    Romance is an ocean and in that ocean the he and she would be always alone. the presence of others wont be felt by them. In the shore of that loneliness be my partner. my friend was asking for partnership in that lonliness

    Give me a new definition of happiness.

    The happiness in romance, love (with or without sex) is kind of happiness unparlleled. There are happiness of different kinds and each of the situtation is unique. my friend was asking for that happiness


    Hold my hand during the journey of life. With our hands together,every sorrow we will survive.

    Hold my hand-> may be two way-> I am offering to hold your hand and I asking to hold my hand. but with the joint hands lets surpass the sorrow and nurish happiness.

    Hurt me, tease me, and make me cry. But in the end give me a shoulder on which I can cry.

    crying does not mean sorrow / displaying weakness. tears rolls down your eyes when the emotion over passes your control. one cries in sorrow, happiness, anger, fear. but for anger, for all other three kind of emotions you may need a shoulder.

    There is a long and small story attached to this SMS:)

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